First love (going to be a song)

by cowgirlstar26   Apr 12, 2007


Yeah yeah its very cliche but arent all country songs?

Verse one

as the months turn into a years your memory fades
maybe a couple more and I'll lose your name
but looking at your picture trying just to forget
the day you looked into my eyes as I curse the night we met
as each teardrop hits the strings on my guitar
before I lock the keys up to my heart....

chorus
I just wanted to know
do you ever think about me
when your lying awake
whos face do you see?
when your next to her
what crosses your mind
well do you think about
all the years you were mine

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  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    This was really good, ditto on what Bonnie said. I think you should take out the 'a' in this sentence:

    "as the months turn into a years your memory fades"

    But other than that, it was great. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a reallt nice song. like Bonnie said it would be a hit if it ever comes out. It was beautifully penned. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by Poeta

    This is really nice, I love it. If it does turn into a song, it would be great! Like Bonnie said, great rythm. ^^

    Heartz!

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    I have to say that if this turns into a song. It would be a hit. I really loved this, truly. It had great rhythm and flow. Nicely penned.

    Take Care,
    Bonnie
    x

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