I really like this poem, short and sweet but still gets the meaning across. Some people have the bluest eyes and it's almost like looking into an ocean, so true. 5/5 nice job

I love the story within the poem. Its deep and is well written.

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[PygmyPuff]

This is the first time I have read one of your poems (I think) I really like your style. Nive use of descriptive words, vey deep, well pinned 5/5 Keep up the good work

Beautiful poem ,excellent write and well done and it was short ,I enjoyed reading it, great job 5/5
your friend Tracy

This was a very nice poem, the structure was wicked and it flowed superb, The repetition of blue eyes makes it outstanding.

IT JUST WORKS!!!!!

well done

5/5

Gary.

Aww, this is very sweet. 5/5

Wow, this is a crazy poem. I liked it though. I can see you wrote it from hate. It was good. 5/5

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This, this poem, I... I loved it so much.
I love the way it flowed and the repetition of 'blue eyes'.
'A royal sky, crowned with gems.' Man. . I love your writing.