Hmm. This was a good poem, as well.
There was something about it though, that I didn't seem to like. I can't quite put it to words. I guess the whole poem seemed a bit forced, kindasorta. A big edgy, like it wasn't straight from the heart, but it was meant to be from the heart. You know?
Anyway, it was a decent poem. Sad, once again.
But a good one.

Keep it up, sweetheart.
<3

I like it, I think this one is quite strong. In both the wording and emotion that sort of "screams" out when reading it.

I liked this one. The words were all strong and clear.

'each ghost that has wrought it ember'

Perhaps 'wrought its' ember' would be more correct?

Other than that, a great write, I really enjoyed reading it and felt encaptured by your words.

Sole. x

Awhh this was real sad:[ but you did a real good job writing it! and im real sorry about everything that youre going through..i hope things get better! wonderful poem.