Wow, i remember sat watching you write this and laughing as you got stressed, lol
But it came out fine so don't worry bbz
Love you
Marcus

Hey this is brillaint, to follow such difficult format , the poem really stands out , great write loved it .

Take care
chavii.

Gem
I love all the diffrent kids of poetry you have mastered. I still have yet to try any of these. Excellent job!

Take Care Love Cindy

Cute and creative

This poem is excellent. It reminds me of well me lol. No matter how hard i try i can help but to be nice. It's really a weakness at times but oh well. Great job. 5/5
-vino

This was great Gem... And you are right, if they just hold on, nice guys will find a nice loving girl, and cruel girls will finish last, and probably alone!!

Wuuu indeed a diffucult thing to write but you seem to be doing an amazing job i could never even attempt something like this just seems too much work lol and yeah nice guys dont get anywhere i learned that :(