Wait For Me

by Katie   Apr 12, 2007


Time slows as I think of you
Every time, I cry
I miss you more than you could know
Please come back to me

The time is up
I've survived
This age has held such easier days
Days when I still touched your face

We'd run on the beach
And laugh till we cried
Such wonderful memories
Gone forever

I wont forget
As long as I'm alive
I'll see you soon
Please wait for me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is really good, it expresses a lot of emotion. Although, I do think that you should try to even out your lines a bit more, it helps the flow of the poem. Also sometimes explain more of what you mean, for example, "The time is up, I've survived." It would be easier for the reader to understand what you mean then. But other than that, it is really good. Well done. =]

    Tammie

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