Excellent, really good!
Lots of feelings in it and an interesting story
Keep going and comment mine if you want to
xx Byee

You did a great job on this poem! i love it! lots of feeling was definitly put into it!!!

Gd

Pretty sad.. there are alot of songs for me that.. just remind me of .. or what me and my ex's called our song. lol can't really listen to them lol it's hard.
But nice poem :) I thought it was really nice a 5/5