My dad (clean and edited version)

Awsome poem,can relate,sorry you had to write such a sad poem

=[ Thanks for commenting mine babe.
This is sad...The only clean poem about your dad eh? :S
I can relate...a bit...My dad and I have so many fights it's actually hard to keep up with him!!
Keep writing babe,
xx Rox

Nice poem... thats all i have to say.

Your poem sounds like me sometimes my da can be a ass hole most of the time,we just dont get on,and he thinks you should have no feeling at all,he lives in a sad lonely world he calls his own :} 5-5
and by the way how old are u