Comments : My dad (clean and edited version)

  • 17 years ago

    by amanda flood

    Your poem sounds like me sometimes my da can be a ass hole most of the time,we just dont get on,and he thinks you should have no feeling at all,he lives in a sad lonely world he calls his own :} 5-5
    and by the way how old are u

  • 17 years ago

    by invisible shadow

    Nice poem... thats all i have to say.

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    =[ Thanks for commenting mine babe.
    This is sad...The only clean poem about your dad eh? :S
    I can relate...a bit...My dad and I have so many fights it's actually hard to keep up with him!!
    Keep writing babe,
    xx Rox

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Awsome poem,can relate,sorry you had to write such a sad poem