by Twisted Heart Apr 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Deep lies the hurt of nonexistence |
Wow. I am honestly speechless. This poem holds so much truth in it. Usually in poems like this, the rhyming feels forced and uncomfortable but I never get that feeling from yours, they just read so smoothly, I truly love all of your work Dear. |
This was incredible and yes very deep. |
by ReBecca
This poem evoked alot of sadness in me. It could have been written from my own heart. Wonderful job. |
For some reason the last line gave me chills |
Hi, that was deep,really enjoyed ,keep up the great work,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,tracy |