Jeannie
This is full of so much deep pain and emotion. Found myself crying when I finished reading this piece. Excellent job!

Among the stars that glow above
Comes distant to the mind
A thought that perished with the sun
And left the joy behind.

Wow! Word choice and imagery great.
Take Care Love Cindy

Hi, that was deep,really enjoyed ,keep up the great work,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,tracy

For some reason the last line gave me chills

This poem evoked alot of sadness in me. It could have been written from my own heart. Wonderful job.

This was incredible and yes very deep.
Great job.

Wow. I am honestly speechless. This poem holds so much truth in it. Usually in poems like this, the rhyming feels forced and uncomfortable but I never get that feeling from yours, they just read so smoothly, I truly love all of your work Dear.