Your poems are more than just words and rythum they are small stories, you are a amazing writter. all addicts are prisioers of addiction. even if your friend was free if he
still uses then he will always be in jail. a jail without bars is still a jail. a brain is a hell of a thing to waste. help him find a way to rit him of his demons and he will be freed. cy

Wow this is such a deep poem. i really ike liked it a lot. you really have a way with words. 5/5

~Kristina

I love the way you write and I love all of the poems I have read. You tell stories through your writing and the finished products end up amazing. 5/5! Great Work!