The flow was smooth and the rhyming was nice. overall i liked this poem. <3

Bryan, babe, that was beautiful! I'm glad to see you getting yourself back to regular... Miss ya babe! xx

Ciao~

Bryan
Great poem. Love seeing the brightness in this piece.

Now six months later my heart is finally free,
healed by love and happy memories,
and for as long as my heart can see,
I will love you, that is my guarantee.

Loved this stanza. Excellent!
Take care your friend Cindy

Great poem and congrats

Great poem you have here Byran, I found it to be beautiful in its own way.

Now six months later my heart is finally free,
healed by love and happy memories,
and for as long as my heart can see,
I will love you, that is my guarantee.

Thats my fav stanza in this poem.

The whole poem flowed flawlesly.
Well done 5/5~mel

Yes, we often go through rough times because of hearts games but then its nice to see that there is a brighter side.
Great poem.

"distroyed by the pain left inside," (sic) (= Destroyed was mispelled in the line.)

I'm glad you got over your former love in just six months of pain; mine's 5 years, and probably still ongoing... When you said, "for as long as my heart can see, I will love you, that is my guarantee.", it makes me wonder how lucky this girl must be to have such a wonderful assurance. I envy her. (lol, just kidding.)
Can you see now how amazing Love can be? :)
Haha. Keep on writing what you feel and like.
all the best and take care.
Love,
Debbie cakes

Beautiful and expressive piece! 5/5

Ah you started that poem feeling sad and ended it with such delight well done i loved it

This is good i like the flow good job and thx again for the comments

keenan

WOW! this is really good!

"distroyed by love, broken in two,"
And I feel the same too..

I love the ending in the poem! good job! 5/5!

Hi, i absolutely love this poem. I love how it is sad at the start but all chearful at the end, definetely brings a tear to my eyes. well done.

I really loved the flow for this one. =]

Nice

Beautiful!
seriously, i really liked this.
the flow was flawless and the rhyming was all good, none seemed forced at all!
and i absolutely love the middle stanza. for me it was the saddest and most descriptive part of the poem.
great job! 5/5

~Sandra

Comment #5:
The trial of moving on with life, from whatever it may be holding us back. And it seems only love can get us through those terrible times. And this poem describes a man who truly is a MAN, because many can't let a love in b/c of their pain. I hope that made some sense :), but basically I'm saying...GREAT job! :)
~Midnight Sun

Great poem lol

Wow...! i like this one.... not too long but very meaningful! im touched and i think it really has a great flow! a bit sad but its romantic..... 5/5

This is so great I love it!
Its so encouraging for me!

Firstly I would like to say that I enjoyed the rhyme and flow in this piece. It makes for a nice read.
Second, I think it is brilliant how you used the two emotions of happy and sad and make the transition between them smooth.
yet again you wrote a very nice poem!

thanks,
~* Natasha *~