by Debbie
The beginning portion gave me a thought of a person engrossed in daydreaming. Later then, it tells us about another nameless person which perhaps have a huge influence to the former - be it a loved one, then. But, in any case, I quite liked this piece. Nicely penned, dear. |
by Milton
I thought it was nice. I sometimes feel like this too. good stuff |
A wonderfuL poeM oF lovE... GOOD expressionS werE sO deeP.. |
Great poem , well written and you expressed it very nice, wording was good, love the way you described everything in your mind, you have a wonderful imagination, keep it up, your friend Tracy d......5/5 |
by Kim
Heya. |