Wow! this poem is so deep! and you have showed such strong emotion and feelings! its totally awesome! 5/5 i dont understnad why itss low rated! :@
keep up the great work! =]
nuff luv x

I can almost feel your pain thogh your words. Good job, but try not to use so many I and you's it make long poems sem repeatious. but it is a good read. Thanks for your comments