Comments : My Walking Prayer

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    From the very beginning to the very end of this poem I was thinking, finally a poem about love that isnt cheesy, that isnt fake. Its real, and its true.

    "You're the laugh
    behind my fears,
    the love behind
    my touch,
    the smile behind
    my face."

    Some of the sweetest words ive ever heard that have been strummed together.
    Great write :]

    Take Care, Bonnie

  • 17 years ago

    by brittany

    THis is beautiful!!!! I GIVE YOU A 10!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by stargirl49

    Amazing, girly!! you're still my sexxi b****!! lol i still have that old notebook that we wrote notes in! i miss you, lissa!

  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    Lovely lovely - Beautifully written

  • 17 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Sooooooooooooo beautiful, thats the word that describes this lovely poem, the more i read the more i love! your a wonderful poet melissa, never stop writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Sooooooooooooo beautiful, thats the word that describes this lovely poem, the more i read the more i love! your a wonderful poet melissa, never stop writing!