I loved it !! keep it up the great workk=))

Awww this poem is so sad yet so sweet! your flow was so perfect and i liked the choice of words too. i had a friend who was in this very situation, exactly the same, and it killed to hear him talk about other girls...im so sorry if this is true! if u eva need to chat to ne1, u can send me a mail anytime!
nuff luv x

Wow really great poem
it describes the situation i'm in right now

*tear* thats so sad! did he really find out? aw....5/5

xo kisses xo