Comments : Dripping Wet and Clearly Depressed

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    I liked how you used alliteration in your poem. "drizzle drowning drenching clouds" It all together strengthens the poem and I also liked how you used repition with the words "drip drip" throughout the poem because it enhanced the feelings associated in the poem. In other words I loved it :]

    Very smart getting the title to rhyme.
    All the best,
    Bonnie
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