Life [Butterfly Oddquain]

by Mezmeryz   Apr 12, 2007


................Life,......................
.............A tunnel..................
.......Travelling in the............
.Darkness, enduring all the..
................Pain.....................
..Overcoming the struggles..
......You are making way,......
..........Through to the...........
.................Light....................

*Syllable order is: 1,3,5,7,1,7,5,3,1.

*please rate or comment on the poem, it will be greatly appreciated and i will comment and rate back all round. Thank- you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    This speaks very truly of life. It's very powerful for being short and to the point. Very very nicely done!! I love it! The flow and word choice is superb. Awesome job!! 5/5

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Sweet a wonderful poem again

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I know you wanted me to be critical but thats very hard with this poem because there wasn't anything there that I didnt like. I loved the words, I loved the fact that it was a different style that I hardly ever see, and I also loved the last 3 lines.. amazing.. and so true we all have to fight through the dark to find the light. Wonderful work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Wow, I havnt seen this poem before its pretty amazing. I liked this the word choice was great and it came up looking very nice. Well done on this poem~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Great poem. I liked it alot.
    5/5

    ~Chelsea

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