I almost cried reading this, so sad so depressing. I really am at a loss for words of what to say about it, I could picture the situation and dialouge in my mind perfectly. 5/5 I'm adding this to my favorites for sure. I was completely in awe the entire time you did an outstanding job capturing the lifeblood of this moment and putting it in writing well done.

This is an amazing poem sad but beautiful.. the flow was good well penned I enjoyed reading this one.

This is an amazing poem sad but beautiful.. the flow was good well penned I enjoyed reading this one. and Yeah I like the title its catchy XD

WOW i dont even know what to say...5/5 for sure and why...i cant explain it is just talkin about every person in the world that has gone through bad experiences and cant get out, drugs...and just stuff like that and i just feel like this poem is a really good way to realize all the bad stuff in the world but know that everything is still going to be ok in the end because everything happens for a reason you know?

I knew the hatred in this world,
would soon get to you.
And I cried as I told you this,
but you knew it was true.

aaah. its awesome and sad. i loved this stanza. 5/5

I love this one too! your a gifted writer

"Who do you turn to
when no one cares?
Why try to run?
There's no place to hide.

Why bother to cry?
No one sees my tears
Why try to shout?
No one will hear."
- I really like this lines.
Whole poem is very touching, and the imagery in it is great.
Last stanza is my favorite, you ended the poem very good.
I like it's flow and the wording is good, too.
5/5 from me

Again very powerful and so heart breaking. It is a shame that you have lived through all this in such a short time.

Sadly, this is becomming more the norm now days for the next generation.

Keep your head up kid and set your eyes on the future.

--Sher

Wow. it was beautifully written. very sad though. i love the way you grasp an idea and you go with it. awesome write. 5/5

my fave stanza

You said each and everyday,
you faced this world of hate,
That the day you lost your wife and child,
is the day you lost your way.

An incredible write, very wonderful, and well penned. keep up the good work

your servant:
atticus