by Vladimir Lorenzo Apr 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Sometimes its all thats left to do, i let the tears roll down till my eyes are poured out dry, as i avert my eyes only hoping no one has noticed my painful truth that lies inside, as i face the truth and only know nothing good will see my way, the chains that burden me rests on my weak body, to heavy for me, i tremble and collapse to my knees, as i lay defenseless while the pain rains down on me, now the only happiness i seem to see are very far from reality and only lives inside my dreams, so easy do they make it sound to rise above the pain, to climb out of this darkness and to live my life again, but where are the words to hold me in the sadness of the night and comfort me with tenderness, when i have no will to fight, no strength to stand and no heart to love, no breath to breathe and no tears to cry, im only left with the option to die, to only fade away from existence. |
Yo this is real nice man...i like the format of your poem. the wway it was written and i like the line whenyou said "as i avert my eyes only hoping no one has noticed my painful truth that lies inside" but you could use the painful truth instead of my painfull truth |
I like this one nikka!!! its real nice 3 kudos...if there was any |
Awesome poem! |