Awesome poem!
So deeply emotion. loved every minute reading it.
I loved the deep and darkness of it

I like this one nikka!!! its real nice 3 kudos...if there was any

Yo this is real nice man...i like the format of your poem. the wway it was written and i like the line whenyou said "as i avert my eyes only hoping no one has noticed my painful truth that lies inside" but you could use the painful truth instead of my painfull truth