The devil's game

DANG! This is amazing. It has emotion, and flow, and creativity and wow. I could go on for hours about how amazing this piece is. 5/5 for sure.

This piece is: I am speechless and have no clue what else I could honestly say.

Indeed it's not a choice. Not gonna start down this path though.

Warning: before you read this, i should warn you, only pain will come of playing, but then again, you don't have a choice

^^ I loved that, kind-of funny.

the devil's game
come and join us
come and play

^^A little scary

the rules
they don't exist
but if you don't follow them
you lose

^^No rules? so how can u lose, i like this line, it's different, and awesome.

places for play
anywhere
everywhere
and nowhere

^^Again, awesome line!

this is the devil's game
and you've been asked to join

^^So simple, but creepy!

this is the devil's game
and you have just been invited

this is the devil's game
the end is never exactly the same
and yet, all know it before they roll the die, before they pick a card
love is hard

^^love it.

this is the devil's game
and it starts now

^^Scary thought.

5/5

Another excellent poem, you amaze me with your writing, it doesn't compare to any i've ever read, i love this! 5/5
if i read 1 more AMAZING poem of yours ur going into my favs, whether u like it or not :)

Good poem, interesting concept...
do you dare to fall in love?
its not up to you

Yes I have and yes I always lost the game :)