by Sarah Doyle Apr 12, 2007
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Life, society /
other
Why must there be a constant change |
by icarus
I found this rather interesting, the poem definitely kept my attention. You made good points and I liked the mood/tone of it. Not a completely morbid or totally depressing work but not happy go lucky. It was a serious poem that 'made you think' a little. I thought your last line could be a little stronger though. Just my opinion. |