Wow..tht seemed like a true story to me....u did an excelent job on this.....i was sorta of like wow did he really did tht...u caught my attension and the ending not a true story i was like...r u dead serious?? good job =)

That was great! it completely stuns you when it turns out to not be true because it seemed to be written with the passion of a victim. great job!

Wow this poem was amazing, i love reading you poetry ur a fantastic writer im making you one of my favorites so i can read more later