Mindblowing, right from the first stanza till the end, the only thing i didnt liked is that this one had end, it really could have gone on and on and on... :o))

keep writing dear

You Are Rocking!!

all the best and take care

That was such a beautiful refreshing poem.
Great job. I loved it.

Very good poem, i really liked the flow, and it had a good ending, good job.

Excellent job on this piece. Imagery was great.

A simple black star reveals its crescent,
To the moon humble and wise,
Whispering words of love for both you and I.

Loved your ending.
Take Care Your frend Cindy