This was so heartbreaking...yet so beautifully written.
When I first started reading, I assumed it was about an ex lover, but then I got to the mother/daughter day part, which made it even more heartbreaking.
It flowed well throughout, the imagery was well done and the ending brought tears to my eyes, it was very effective.
There's a couple of spelling errors that need fixing, but other than that you did a great job.

The poem was confusing at times, and the flow was off. But i loved the topic, so 5/5 babe
-Liz-

That poem pretty much describes my relationship with my mother.. it honestly brought tears to my eyes. Awsome.

Wow, this poem was so great and so touchy.......
you have done a great job with the poem it self and with the word choices. keep it up. i think this is my first time reading you and i regrat of not seeing your wonderful poems before.

Wow...this is really a powerful poem...
beautifully written also, and full of emotion...
5/5
*isabel*

Wow this is an excellent poem, the emotions run deep and it is really sad. I loved the first stanza and can relate to it as well. Your a marvelous writer. a few minor corrections though. Dieing=dying, to scared=too scared, fell pain =feel pain and to afraid=too afraid. other that that nice work. flowed well 4/5

Great job on this poem. i really liked it. the flow was great. and the emotion was strong. i enjoyed reading this poem. even though it was quite sad. great job.

Beautiful poem hun!!!.it's so WOW!!.....n it's filled wth deep emotions n the flow was flawless n in short-Powerful write!
Kp up the good wrk!
xxPoojaxx

Okay this was really good! I was touched by this poem! well done! the emotions was strong keep it up! the flow was a little bit off but overall its a good poem.

WOW i have never read a poem like this and as much as it is sad it is true and it just makes me realize that people do go through this kindof stuff everyday and it kills me to know that but i know that you have to go through pain like this in order to write such poetry...5/5

I really hope this isn't happening to you. It is awful to not what it's like to be close or "best friends" with your mom. Keep it up

How sad this is. the flow of words realy touched my heart. it was such a great workl you have talent take care 5/5

You did a wonderful job on this

Wow, the emotions just jump right off the page. I like that. This poem had a lot of depth. If my mom left me behind to be raised by my dad or someone else I would be upset too. Anyways great poem. 5/5

Thanks fire lilies...but my dad wasn't there either :(

This is so good, i can really relate to this. i love the way you have confesses your feelings in a way that really invites the reader to empathise. Well Done
DnB