Oh the ending to this was so perfect and dramatic. so forceful yet i didn't feel like it was too demanding. i loved the message at the end. my favourite part of the poem you must see.

5/5 David

Another beautiful poem. 5/5

-Liz-
~of life to live~

Awww i loved the end!! I loved the whole thing. Very very well written! Keep it up. Xx Chrissie

Wow, you have a way with words, i dunno how to explain, simply i like your poetry!