by Koa Apr 13, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
love is
You fall into it just to fall out |
by Vodka
Did you write this one for me? because it pretty much seems like it... anyway, it's was good, but i couldn't really figure out your rhyme scheme. oh well, you're still cool anyway. (oh by the way, I'm confessing my love for you) JK! see ya later hunny |
by Yvonne
Good poem! It is very true. But I would reccomend taking out the second "you" on the second line. Good writing! Keep it up. |