Good poem! It is very true. But I would reccomend taking out the second "you" on the second line. Good writing! Keep it up.

Did you write this one for me? because it pretty much seems like it... anyway, it's was good, but i couldn't really figure out your rhyme scheme. oh well, you're still cool anyway. (oh by the way, I'm confessing my love for you) JK! see ya later hunny