Haha i like the bottom :written by david, not dave :] |
by Kaila
Haha!! |
by Stephanie
=] Yay! My name was in it! =] Lmao. Wonderful poem David, I can honestly say I've never read anything like it. ;] 5/5 |
Lol whats my name (cassandra( very well done <3 |
Lol, kind of a randome little poem there, but it brought a much needed smile to my face!! Thanks!! ^_^ 5/5 for sure!!! And thanks a ton for that comment on my poem!!!! |
by amoxi
You really put a lot of though into this poem, it was good 5/5 |
by Vanessa
Lol that was funny, and actually kind of cute. Awwe. Anyway the flow was fantisic, and the humor well placed. I can't say that i have read any poem like it on this site. truly talented you are keep up the good work 5/5 |
by Fsams
Ha ha I found this piece little funny to read. I understand how funny our nick names could be. Good work. Keep up the spirit. :) |
by Karissa
Wow, something I havent seen before. And it is very creative. And I love the ending. Hah. |
by Joe
So cute! How do you rhyme like that? |
by NinjaGirl
Beautifully random 5/5 XD |
by Sydney
Aha yeah that was random lol. Made me smile do thats a plus : ]] Nice one |
by Angela
Wow.. do you actually know all these ppl?? |
Very unique! absolutly adorable! who would have thought to do a poem like that? lol |
by Greg Beam
Very nice... this is an extremely unique piece of writing. great job this is put together very nicely. once again great originality... 5/5 |
by Meme
How about we call u Dave ?! |
by Blissful
I just loved how random this was and unexpected. It was light and a great way to end my day, it was funny and made me chuckle. :] It was unique and a joy to read. *5/5* |
by Domino0792
Channon is Chan. |
Haha well that certainly made me chuckle a bit. |