Forever

by Goran Rahim   Apr 13, 2007


It is morning,
Still
I am awake
The night is not over for me.
I am still here
In front of my computer
Your photo is my wallpaper
Looking into your hazel eyes,
A true beauty
That I see.
Your those eyes are
Creating many questions in my mind.
Do you love me?
That is my mind's concern
Yet
The heart replies "Yes"
As I know
She is so kind.

Your smile gives me hope.
It makes my pen
To continue writing
And never stop.
Yet
What about the flowers you'r killing?
Is it for someone else?
Is it anyone in this universe?
Who can care like I do?
Well,
They are my unanswered questions
Making me sleepless,
Yet I want you to know
That forever
I love you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    3000th vote! I will read the poem now!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I really like your work. Your poems don't have a forced rhyme or syllabol counts or anything it's just a good poem and it's there and I really enjoyed this piece what a fantastic job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Hmm...
    Like I said.
    The flow is weak.
    This is different from "Hazel Eyes"
    I don't like it as much. I'm sorry to say.
    Maybe because it's cliched.
    But then love is cliched.
    So it must be me.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    I think this is an amazing poem. You did a wonderful job on writing it. You have so many great poems!!!!! well done. 5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    Man there are 2 lines in this poem that captivate me. made it an awsome read.
    "they are my unanswerd questions"
    "making me sleepless"
    5/5

    Tom

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