Comments : Forever

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Haha first comment *suckers!!* haha jk jk another awsome poem in which i think this is goin to b on the front page of the love poems....but awsome poem as always..

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Oh i loved this. the love and affection was evident. and your longing for your love is so well described.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    AWww. Such a sad, but sweet poem! Another great peice of work created by you. Keep it up! God Bless 5/5
    <3Tayy

  • 17 years ago

    by shela

    Now we all want to have hazel eyes,
    but i'm so happy to read happy poems by you. wonderful dear.

  • 17 years ago

    by mrhope

    I hope you get the answers for your unanswered questions, I believe you never write a poem if it does not touch your readers deeply, but I wonder what it does to the person you wrote for?

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a beautiful poem. It is another sign of the wonderful talent you have for writting poetry. It's odd isn't it. You write about a person you like with Hazel eyes, and i have written about my hazel eyes. It's just something we have in common in poetry i guess. Anyways great poem. another 5/5 from me.

    Kalee

  • All your writing are master piece and i believe you know it by know, everyone talks about how ur words touch others and how romantic you are, and i wish the world or the people who come across ur kind of writing learn something from it, teach the world how to love not hatred...
    great poem
    hopefully this hazel eye girl of urs will come to know what she means to u because i know ur poem comes from ur heart and thats no lie.......
    take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Awwww you could just feel the emotion you put into this poem, it was amazing and beautiful, isn't it amazing the love we can feel for someone?

    amazing job

    brittany (MD)

  • 17 years ago

    by becca

    Another beautiful and talented poe. u really know how to captivate ur audience! definately keep it up! im loking forward to reding more f your work! xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Great poem! Dast xosh Goran. always looking foreword to read your poems. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Shelly

    I like this one, makes me smile ^^

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    That's so beautiful, as your love poems always are. sounds like what i do every night, lay awake wishing my baby was by my side. your poems are so sweet, they make me wanna cry sometimes 5/5 what else?

  • 17 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    That was soo great, you rleased alot of feelings and it showed, i loved it!! thnx so mch 4 ur cmmnt on mine, plez check mi other poemz so i can get ur feedback, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    Man there are 2 lines in this poem that captivate me. made it an awsome read.
    "they are my unanswerd questions"
    "making me sleepless"
    5/5

    Tom

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    I think this is an amazing poem. You did a wonderful job on writing it. You have so many great poems!!!!! well done. 5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Hmm...
    Like I said.
    The flow is weak.
    This is different from "Hazel Eyes"
    I don't like it as much. I'm sorry to say.
    Maybe because it's cliched.
    But then love is cliched.
    So it must be me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I really like your work. Your poems don't have a forced rhyme or syllabol counts or anything it's just a good poem and it's there and I really enjoyed this piece what a fantastic job!

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    3000th vote! I will read the poem now!