Haha first comment *suckers!!* haha jk jk another awsome poem in which i think this is goin to b on the front page of the love poems....but awsome poem as always.. |
by David
Oh i loved this. the love and affection was evident. and your longing for your love is so well described. |
AWww. Such a sad, but sweet poem! Another great peice of work created by you. Keep it up! God Bless 5/5 |
by shela
Now we all want to have hazel eyes, |
by mrhope
I hope you get the answers for your unanswered questions, I believe you never write a poem if it does not touch your readers deeply, but I wonder what it does to the person you wrote for? |
by Kalee
This is a beautiful poem. It is another sign of the wonderful talent you have for writting poetry. It's odd isn't it. You write about a person you like with Hazel eyes, and i have written about my hazel eyes. It's just something we have in common in poetry i guess. Anyways great poem. another 5/5 from me. |
All your writing are master piece and i believe you know it by know, everyone talks about how ur words touch others and how romantic you are, and i wish the world or the people who come across ur kind of writing learn something from it, teach the world how to love not hatred... |
Awwww you could just feel the emotion you put into this poem, it was amazing and beautiful, isn't it amazing the love we can feel for someone? |
by becca
Another beautiful and talented poe. u really know how to captivate ur audience! definately keep it up! im loking forward to reding more f your work! xXx |
by Avan Ahmad
Great poem! Dast xosh Goran. always looking foreword to read your poems. 5/5 |
by Shelly
I like this one, makes me smile ^^ |
by Mousie
That's so beautiful, as your love poems always are. sounds like what i do every night, lay awake wishing my baby was by my side. your poems are so sweet, they make me wanna cry sometimes 5/5 what else? |
That was soo great, you rleased alot of feelings and it showed, i loved it!! thnx so mch 4 ur cmmnt on mine, plez check mi other poemz so i can get ur feedback, 5/5 |
by AlaSkA
Man there are 2 lines in this poem that captivate me. made it an awsome read. |
I think this is an amazing poem. You did a wonderful job on writing it. You have so many great poems!!!!! well done. 5/5 |
by Startle Me
Hmm... |
by Kaila
I really like your work. Your poems don't have a forced rhyme or syllabol counts or anything it's just a good poem and it's there and I really enjoyed this piece what a fantastic job! |
3000th vote! I will read the poem now! |