by BeautifulxMess Apr 13, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Confessions she revealed about her past, |
Excellent write. The emotion and concept work hand-in-hand to create a very sad, yet easy-to-relate poem. The flow was flawless, and the concept was brilliant. Not to mention a word usage rarely seen. :) 5/5 |
Great poem! 5/5 it had a great flow and it rhymed well, great job hun! |
by supratim
YOU HAVE DONE A GREAT JOB. |
by Wallace
Amazing, superb poem, all I can do is stand in awe, this is truly incredible, keep p the fantastic work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time. |
by skynerraw
Wow, well written, the flow was great, and I cannot relate but I felt it...:D Loved it! It was an awesome poem! And a great use of words! |