Your Hurricane

by Romancing the Darker Side   Apr 13, 2007


Yu've dragged me into
The darker side of life
Your winds swish and siwrl
Upon your tongue

The rain dances just a bit
It has a subtle effect
Prancing through the hour
We hang our heads low

Eye of the storm
All remains calm for now
I'll check back in an hour
And you'll be raging on again

Your hurricane is too much for me
I dare to swim away
Your waters take their grip on me
And watch me drown slowly

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I'm comparing a hurricane to a relationship, and part of the inspiration for this poem came from the song Hurricane by Something Corporate.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow... i really enjoyed reading this poem... the methaphor to a hurricane was nice... the flow was good except in the last line... i think it would sound nicer it you wrote "and watch me slowly drown" but just for flow purposes... besides that the word choice was nice and you got the message across well.

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Although there were a few spelling mistakes it was still quite interesting.
    yet again you have captured my adoration love.

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Great use of a similie poem!
    I guess if that's what you were going for.
    Well whatever you were going for you did a fine job. God Bless 5/5
    <3tayyy

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