Great use of a similie poem!
I guess if that's what you were going for.
Well whatever you were going for you did a fine job. God Bless 5/5
<3tayyy

Although there were a few spelling mistakes it was still quite interesting.
yet again you have captured my adoration love.

Wow... i really enjoyed reading this poem... the methaphor to a hurricane was nice... the flow was good except in the last line... i think it would sound nicer it you wrote "and watch me slowly drown" but just for flow purposes... besides that the word choice was nice and you got the message across well.