by KeyxMashingxParody Apr 13, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
The heart pounding silence breaks the peace, |
by Nix
Wow, another one. Breath- taking poem. Wording is superb and you really now how to make majestic atmosphere. |
Another great read! Awesome!!! |
by icarus
I interpreted this as being about death. If so it was a rather interesting depiction of your final moments. I liked your first line. Not really a contradiction but there was contrast (not sure if thats the best word). Silence doesn't typically break peace so it catches the readers attention early on. |
by AlaSkA
I like this one also especialy the line |
Very nice poem! You did an awesome job with your word use. I personally am not a fan of a non rhyming poem, but you did a fine job on this one. God Bless 5/5 |