by honeypot
This is really touching, teh love shines out of this poem like a star! |
by amanda flood
Ah so sweet 5-5 |
You must really be in love with your bf, sweet i lied the way you used prayer as your way of love, this gave it a sort of double meaning in the poem welldone really good. |
Good poem. |
by Goran Rahim
Another great poem by a great poet. |
by Darien
Wow, that was a very inspirational poem, and although it was for someone you care about, I'm sure others can find hope from it!.. Good job! |
by Teria
I loved the last stanza. good job. :D |
by Jenni Marie
This was really sweet, it made me smile whilst reading it. |
Very nicely written with great emotion within. I loved it. Great Job. |
Beautifully penned!....good job! |
by Krzysztof J
Thank you for your comment :) |
I loved it!! I don't see many poems like this, and i really do appreciate a good read. So heartfelt and sweet, deserves only the best 5/5 god bless to you too! |
by Robert
This was very sweet. But I think if you stayed with one angel or started with two angels the poem itself would flow alot better just a thought. Good try though. Plot121 |
by Marc Ortiz
Aww this is so sweet! I wish someone will do the same for me! the flow was smooth! this poem is unique. :) well done! well written! keep writing! I love this poem! :) |
A really sweet poem. Much more meotional then the previous poem i read. I have to say i really enjoyed it. It was sweet and something that many of us have someone who we feel this way about. Anyways with this poem it must of calmed the little exam nurves taht this person had. :) Its really sweet that you care about them so much. Anyways not sure what else to say about the poem, it was sweet, and it had a good flow to it. Keep it up! xx |
Your thoughts seem to be so sincere; that's what I love about your writing. It may not rhyme, but the sincerity drags me in. =] |
by Fsams
Lots of love and devotion in this one, great write with a perfect flow. I felt really something special about this one coz i also love writing to my darling. 5/5 great |
by Jenni Marie
This was so beautifully written...made me smile whilst reading. |
Sweet poem, it's very positive and nicely written. |
by lish
Was a beautiful poem it has feeling and emotion |