Comments : A Prayer

  • 17 years ago

    by honeypot

    This is really touching, teh love shines out of this poem like a star!

    You really love whoever this poem is for - I think the angel is you

    Honeypot x

  • 17 years ago

    by amanda flood

    Ah so sweet 5-5

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    You must really be in love with your bf, sweet i lied the way you used prayer as your way of love, this gave it a sort of double meaning in the poem welldone really good.

    xxx alex xxx

  • Good poem.
    The flow was good and the emotion was shown.
    Keep it up 5/5

    |Sarah|

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem by a great poet.
    truly you have shown your great talent once more. very nicely written and very emotional.
    a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, that was a very inspirational poem, and although it was for someone you care about, I'm sure others can find hope from it!.. Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I loved the last stanza. good job. :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was really sweet, it made me smile whilst reading it.
    I liked the last stanza most, it was very touching and I could sense the emotion behind the words.
    beautifully done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nicely written with great emotion within. I loved it. Great Job.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautifully penned!....good job!
    very sweet poem!
    Loved it!
    Tk care!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Thank you for your comment :)
    i think we all need the angels helps sometimes :) i loved this poem it gave me a sence of hope :) thank you for writing it :) it gets a 99/5 from me :)

  • 17 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    I loved it!! I don't see many poems like this, and i really do appreciate a good read. So heartfelt and sweet, deserves only the best 5/5 god bless to you too!

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    This was very sweet. But I think if you stayed with one angel or started with two angels the poem itself would flow alot better just a thought. Good try though. Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww this is so sweet! I wish someone will do the same for me! the flow was smooth! this poem is unique. :) well done! well written! keep writing! I love this poem! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    A really sweet poem. Much more meotional then the previous poem i read. I have to say i really enjoyed it. It was sweet and something that many of us have someone who we feel this way about. Anyways with this poem it must of calmed the little exam nurves taht this person had. :) Its really sweet that you care about them so much. Anyways not sure what else to say about the poem, it was sweet, and it had a good flow to it. Keep it up! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Your thoughts seem to be so sincere; that's what I love about your writing. It may not rhyme, but the sincerity drags me in. =]

    Nicely done, no complaints here.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Lots of love and devotion in this one, great write with a perfect flow. I felt really something special about this one coz i also love writing to my darling. 5/5 great

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so beautifully written...made me smile whilst reading.
    The emotion and depth are clear for all to see, flow is good throughout the entire poem, and the ending is beautifully wrapped up.

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Sweet poem, it's very positive and nicely written.
    My favorite stanza is:
    "Through this two angels;
    They will help you for all your difficulties,
    And I pray that they will stay with you
    As long as you want."
    This is not my type of poetry, put I guess it's o.k.

  • 17 years ago

    by lish

    Was a beautiful poem it has feeling and emotion
    well done