This piece truly did send shivers down my spine. Engaging from the first line, it is written with honesty and passion which I do not often feel with other work.
In a league of it's own.

Wow that was so touching at first without hte missing you part it reminded me of my ex who came back or tried to come back in my life and ididnt want him there and unconsciously he did and yeh...but this is a very powerful piece. great job.

melissa