by tears i cry Apr 13, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
As I sit and watch |
by Goodbye
Poem was good. I like the way you expressed your feelings. Good job! :) |
by noha
Ya you right you know and he know but it hurt us more than he know, beautiful again you got the talent to be a good poet keep write and never stope |
This poem was really good. Although it could be written a little better... the flow was great and the word choice was good. This concept was very deep... I really felt that you were in love while I read this. It's good to have a reader feel you in a poem. Good write! 5/5 |
by khate
I love the title,..and i love the poem too,.its so nice,specially the last stanza,. |
That last stanza was simply fantastic way to tie up your piece great work- raindrops 5/5 |