by crystaljean88 Apr 13, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I loved you but u didn't love me, |
by Christina
Awwz thats rele....i hope that rele didnt ever happen to you because thats so horrible....and i think thats sad when guys call you ugly! |
by awww
I like the story that you're telling here.. for some reason it made me look beyond the words and imagine for myself how it would be.. the meaning flows through for me.. just one point.. i found some parts forceful on the rhyme... otherwise it was a good write.. keep it up |
by Michelle18
Another great poem...and all you need is some self confidence....im dating a guy who thinks im beautiful but i think that im ugly..and he told me all i need is self confidence and everything will be okay... just be strong and dont bring yourself down and even if he's not in your life you will be okay. |
by Michelle
If he really loves u he'll come back and if he doesnt dont worry bout it u are such a good person and can do better anyway |
I loved this one...touching..filled wth passion..beautiful...i can relate too..but i think u must directly go tell him about your feelings..lol....anyways good wrk! |