I love this poem if he knew how u really felt then maybe u could be with him??u should tell him even if he don't feel the same way then atleast he'll know how u feel about him nd then maybe someday u two can be together???u never know the same thing happned to me but i found sum1 beter who i love even more n treats me so good u kno???later hun n where is chesterville???
x0xRickysbabyx0x

Another touching piece ,and beautifully written.Why are you so hard on yourself ?,you mentioned ugly again ,please don't ever think your ugly ,I am certain you have a big heart and you are a lovely person ,I sense that from reading your work.I have been reading through many of your writes and in a way its like reading some of my own life.

It was good I just felt it would have flowed better with 4 lines per stanza

If you were to write this to someone that understood all those things you were unwilling to write in this piece it would be great. Being a reader that just saw this for what it was. I have no clue as to the history you are talking about. Who are you writing for this one person or the general public, I think if you master the two adresses your work would show more conviction and power just a thought. Plot121

I loved this one...touching..filled wth passion..beautiful...i can relate too..but i think u must directly go tell him about your feelings..lol....anyways good wrk!
Kp writing!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

If he really loves u he'll come back and if he doesnt dont worry bout it u are such a good person and can do better anyway

Another great poem...and all you need is some self confidence....im dating a guy who thinks im beautiful but i think that im ugly..and he told me all i need is self confidence and everything will be okay... just be strong and dont bring yourself down and even if he's not in your life you will be okay.

I like the story that you're telling here.. for some reason it made me look beyond the words and imagine for myself how it would be.. the meaning flows through for me.. just one point.. i found some parts forceful on the rhyme... otherwise it was a good write.. keep it up
~angel~

Awwz thats rele....i hope that rele didnt ever happen to you because thats so horrible....and i think thats sad when guys call you ugly!

<3 i love you silly