0.o FIRST COMMENT!!

any ways...

I love the poem, and the ending was great ...maybe my favorite part. One part I dint think quite flowed though was the "Splat!" It kind of threw off the groove for me, maybe its just the way i read it. But over all i loved it, ohh the ending..i just love it!!!

"The only part that really matters is thie ending"

Johnny Depp- Secret window

Laters and love

JBN