I loved the images in this poem.

Tears are tragic nothings,
Glass that shatters dreams,

Thats my favorite part because I can just see it in my mind. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Another great piece! 5/5 bravo! I loved the flow in every bit of this poem and hope toread more of your poetry. Good job!

Another very well written poem. I'm sorry if my comments seem to drag on or seem useless. I'm really tired, it's 3am here, and my eyes are tired, but I said, I'll just finish it tonight/morning before I forget!.. lol.
Good job on this poem, I like the rhyme scheme, but I could never really get use to it. I'm not much of a rhymer, but I try.