Excellent piece :) Very sad and you can feel the sadness in every word.
Take Care Cindy

That was an amazing poem. This poem really brings the reader in. Even though it was sad, it was beautiful.
Great job. Keep it up.

Daniel.. I just wanted to tell you that I enjoyed reading your poem. I just recently lost my father, but he is in a better place too, with my mom. You reached in to the center of your heart and found these words.. and they are yours forever. You write very well Daniel.. keep up the good work. I will keep reading your work. ummm the apple didn't fall far from this tree! ~LOL~ tom

Wow this was an amazing poem. Great emotion, very sad. Keep it up. 5/5

Memories are the most precious things we have and in memories the person is never gone :) a beautifull poem :) i can quite easily relate as i know many other people will too :)) 99/5

An excellent write ,sad and yet so beautifully done.You have such amazing talent for one so young ,keep it up ,will be waiting to read so much more from you.

That was a beautifull poem i loved it. i just recently lost my grandma and that poem meant a lot to me. i wish i could write poems like that.

It's a fantastic poem... You're really talented... You are so young yet you've written such a touching piece... It's incredible! I hope there's many more to come! Cheers!

Memories is what keeps us rooted to our past and they provide a lesson for the future :) a beautifull and heartfelt poem :) i really enjoyed it even tho it made me think of a few sad times still i give it 5/5 :)

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Aww, Daniel... This was a touching and beautiful poem. You are extremely talented, and this poem really made me think. I enjoyed reading it and I hope everything in your life is going well. :)
Take care okay? and keep writing your wonderful poems!

Much love and care!

Ps: I'm really sorry about your loss...

A powerful poem to be sure, the way you wrote, the way you tell a story and the way you make the story come to life in your poem....marvelous.

i'm sorry about your loss.