What a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading this.

Smiling as your eyes pour into mine
Watching the smile creep along your lips
This is my own version of heaven
Lay snuggled in your sweet grip.

Loved your ending stanza.
Take Care Cindy

Awww this poem is so sweet i absaloutly love it, it made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, =] love <3 ha its so sweet

amazing

brittany (MD)

Such a heartwarming and romantic poem! I loved the ending it just made me all giddy! I know exactly this feeling and I think I agree, that is a great version of heaven. Great write!