by isabel
Wonderful poem and an awesome idea... |
Great write Alyson. I think if you shortened the lasy line to "how it feels only I understand" it would flow nicely at the end. I lived in the library and I love to read, I thought it was a great suject. Nice work and thanks for your comment. |
by David
I loved the starting the most. the perfect descritption to make the reader interested in reading more. and this worked on me. |