Flee

by Jenni Marie   Apr 13, 2007


Walking towards home
Quickening her pace
Sure someone is following her
Terror on her face.

Instead of cutting through this alley
Why hadn't she walked the main street?
She'd been sure she'd be okay
Now she could hear her own heartbeat.

Hearing branches snapping behind
Turning quickly on her heel
Running as fast as she possibly can
is she about to be some psycho's next meal?

Stumbling along the ground
Branches stinging her arms
Her one and only desire
To be away from this harm.

Wind whipping her skin
As she's leaped on from behind
Wondering if in the morning
it's her body someone will find.

Hitting the floor hard
Head connecting with the ground
Stars dancing around her vision
Simultaneously with the horrible sound.

Arms flailing in the air
As she fights for her life
Wondering how she ended up
Getting involved in such strife.

Gasping for air
Vision starting to dim
Pushing the pain aside
This is one fight she must win.

Letting out an involuntary gasp
As she sees what he holds in his hand
As he bring his knife downwards
She wonders if this is her last day on this land...

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Ohhh wow that is so scary, great poem though, very different from all the others i've read, makes it really stand out

    great job

    brittany (MD)

  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    The visuals are well done. You might want to let go of the rigid rhymes in places. One wouldn't normally say "last day on this LAND" or "it's her body someone will FIND" or "getting involved in such strife". Better to sacrifice the rhyme than to settle for a word that isn't quite right

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Ohh this was very fabulous work for me i love the way u write in this poetry... actually it captivate me at first line so i read it twice... its very enjoyable i think flow was so great and i carried away.... very great job... keep it up! 5/5

More Poems By Jenni Marie