Wow, i really like this poem. Although I dont know the situation, I kinda felt it slightly if that makes sense - and to make a reader feel something is a sign of a great writer - keep writing. By the way the saying you use when push goes to shove, i've always heard it said when push comes to shove but i'm not actually sure how it goes, just something you might wanna check, if you like. 5/5 =)