A secret

by jamie saunders   Apr 13, 2007


A secret that I released A secret you told
me to keep

I am sorry I LET YOU DOWN I can only say
One thing but it does not release the pain

I am so so sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by lizZ

    I like it, to make it more snappy (?) (is that the right word? ) you could use fullstops so its like BAM. BAM. BAM. instead of bam bam bam ...sorry if that doesnt make sense xxx

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