DAMN! That's hot..."HOT LIKE HEAT" HAHAHA You out did yourself with this one buddy! I love it! "Compatibility for all races; but only mature ages" I told you last night...I LOVE THAT LINE!!!! I just freaking love it! Great stuff man!!!

I must say this poem actually is really good...I truly loved the descriptive tone to it...Well done Mr...

Wonderful!
I dont see how you can make it rhyme and still make sence...hehe ahhh, def a 5/5

Nice ending. Nice middle and beginning too. I liked this because you mixed subtle references to obvious ones without sounding over the top. Nice job.